In a chocolate night, they decided to go to a beautiful shore.
When they arrived, it was almost sunset. They were listening to the peaceful music of the waves while watching the beautiful orange reflection of the sun, which was broken by the waves.
Sitting on a rock, the girl was watching the sunset. She was resting her hands on the rock and the curls of her black hair were dancing with the wind, and the light breeze was cuddling her face. She didn't notice that he's taking an unexpected side view photo from her left.
On the way back, when they were talking about the pleasures of their short trip, the guy told her about that secret photo, but never showed it to her.
Not knowing at the same time, she had many secret unique photos of him…
2 comments:
Hi.
I think in this sentence:
They were listening to the peaceful music of the waves while watching the beautiful orange reflection of the sun.
you should write like this:
They listened to the peaceful music of the waves while were watching the beautiful orange reflection of the sun.
because in those sentence after while you should write past continue.
but I like like that photo I think that photo should be very beautiful.
I asked someone about it. But it seems that it's not wrong and the "while" is not using just in Past continuous. You can read more here.
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